I am tired today, for some reason.
But I got Chapter 37 edited, and it was a bear. Lots of mouth sounds, and lots of me coughing and doing lines badly. Carmine and Arcove have a long conversation, and too often, they didn't sound differently enough to each other (but she didn't keep saying, "Carmine said" or "said Arcove," which I would've sprinkled liberally throughout, to make up for my narrating shortcomings.
It's long, but it's not so long that I should have fallen asleep over and over again. I guess I'll blame it on the Thanksgiving turkey.
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