Also, sorry about this story's title, though I am a little less sorry.
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Rish
Monday, July 07, 2014
Rish Outcast 9: Mick Attends An Elementary School Carnival
So, this was the one that was supposed to drop last time. Sorry, y'all.
Also, sorry about this story's title, though I am a little less sorry.
Right click HERE to download the episode, select Save Link As, and save the file to your hard drive.
Rish
Also, sorry about this story's title, though I am a little less sorry.
Right click HERE to download the episode, select Save Link As, and save the file to your hard drive.
Rish
Tech stuff first. The embedded player worked fine, but the "Right-click to download" link doesn't.
ReplyDeleteI liked the story. I like the ending the way it was. I think there was enough there to understand what was going on. I think you handled it very deftly. You might have had the ex show up at the carnival in the beginning just to introduce her as a character rather than a reference. Some of the differences might have had more impact at the end. He could have been trying to avoid her etc.
I thought the "Sex with a Supermodel" booth was a bit implausible for a elementary school carnival, but it was funny.
As for a title, maybe "For A Good Cause"