tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9629462.post8552750083952672727..comments2024-03-26T22:23:22.556-07:00Comments on Rish's Ramblings: Live Writing Exercise 26Rish Outfieldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16126627112516914578noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9629462.post-36357794459072923022014-08-01T12:59:20.473-07:002014-08-01T12:59:20.473-07:00I really like the ending on this, nice wrap up.I really like the ending on this, nice wrap up.Jasonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17006622803604956176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9629462.post-8300123690353959802014-07-30T17:35:00.459-07:002014-07-30T17:35:00.459-07:00Really cool story. So many surprising elements thr...Really cool story. So many surprising elements throughout, and a clever ending.Bria Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17429297309871518492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9629462.post-57355531605005378922014-07-24T05:19:04.293-07:002014-07-24T05:19:04.293-07:00Great ending. I did not see that coming from anywh...Great ending. I did not see that coming from anywhere, and it's a great payoff. NYCTomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17549916981607648463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9629462.post-19170981620454240302014-07-23T20:31:52.387-07:002014-07-23T20:31:52.387-07:00Man. Hoisted on her own petard.
Great ending man....Man. Hoisted on her own petard. <br />Great ending man. Great story. Seraphhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10590372127970386795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9629462.post-27720417622042795552014-07-23T08:39:55.892-07:002014-07-23T08:39:55.892-07:00Ooh awesome ending!! Ooh awesome ending!! Tenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17922231337225142653noreply@blogger.com